Name: bebe11 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 08:03 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hot and sweet!
Author's Response: thanks!
Name: MDFawn (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 04:55 pm · For: Chapter 1
Love the background story of the two previous summers. Glad that Noah finally had the guts to be "out" with Luke and glad he was there to protect him.
Author's Response: As a teenager it's hard. Feel for Luke though, going through those summers as the secret affair.
Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 10:51 am · For: Chapter 1
Glad Noah grew enough to get the courage to live openly, and commit himself to Luke for good. And I loved Holden's knowing wink lol. Best dad EVAH!
Author's Response: The story plays with the idea a little that Luke is remembering a Noah from the year before, and a lot of the story is in the fact that the Noah Luke remembers has grown up and figured out what he wants.
Name: blondie (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 07:17 am · For: Chapter 1
Name: hollyoaks1021 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 04:50 am · For: Chapter 1
Wow, That was a really great read.
Enjoyed it very much and the ending was perfect.
Author's Response: I'm told I sometimes have people propose to early... and maybe I do. I just... I remember what that sort of young love is like. I remember the first time I proposed, and I didn't wait until it made sense or was convenient, I did it when I felt like being away from the person was torture. And I think that often happens early in a relationship, and we learn to put off the asking of the question. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it.
Name: wheelie47 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 01:07 am · For: Chapter 1
Great response to the challenge. Sweet and so very hot at the same time.
Name: comicgirl (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 07:13 pm · For: Chapter 1
o,m,g i love it !!!
Name: Cariad123 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 01:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wonderful story ! it had every you could possibly need in a story thank you x
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 12:45 pm · For: Chapter 1
i have to say this is absolutly fabulous
loved the detail the description of their emotion and the past still present in what they were doing.
The desperation yet the love , the want and the insecurity the hope always there in the back of their minds
very impressive !
Author's Response: One of the things the show did well was in showing those insecurities, and that makes it easier to translate onto the page even in an AU story.
Name: jberri79 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 12:26 pm · For: Chapter 1
Nice reply to the challenge. That was a good one-shot.
Name: Seajellybaby (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:36 am · For: Chapter 1
"feasting as much on looks in each other's eyes as on the food on the table"
Great line! This is amazing! I really like how you went down the AU route with this. Great idea using the boardwalk as a place of hiding and wonderful to watch the boys come out into the open and face their fears! AMAZING! Thanks so much for taking part!
Author's Response: the AU stories are growing on me, obviously.
Name: SarahSezLove (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:36 am · For: Chapter 1
So many lovely moments.
Name: Valenti1965 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 11:28 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh wow. That was just fantastic! What a great read. Great response to the picture! Glad Noah protected Luke against Kevin. What scumbags the lot of them. Great lovemaking scene. Looking forward now to see what you write for the promptfic you have being tagged! x
Author's Response: hey, a good prompt and a good pic help create the scene for a good response.