Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 11:56 am · For: Chapter 1
Very intriguing start! Luke seems kind of stuck in a holding pattern, as can happen after a traumatic loss - maybe like he feels moving forward is a betrayal of some kind to the person who died.
And how interesting that the person who kicked Noah's ass to get to Oakdale was his self-admittedly somewhat homophobic roommate. Noah, if even THAT guy realizes you need to be with Luke... get on the plane, brotha! LOL!
Really looking forward to reading more. What an impressive first effort!
Name: Valenti1965 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 09:54 pm · For: Chapter 1
Great start! I can understand Noah having 2nd thoughts....Gald Jake talked him into going. Can't wait till they meet again! x
Name: blondie (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 09:56 am · For: Chapter 1
very intresting i will keep an eye to see where this goes great first chap
Name: JustSomeoneSomewhere (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 09:51 am · For: Chapter 1
I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Name: Seajellybaby (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 06:57 am · For: Chapter 1
Congratulations on your first fic! And what a great entrance! I'm sad Luke has stayed away for so long and not followed Noah to LA like Noah asked him too. It will be interesting to see what Noah has to say about that...
But despite the separation it appears Luke still wants Noah back regardless...
I look forward to reading more...
Name: worthwaitingfor (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 05:42 am · For: Chapter 1
i can't wait for the nxt chpter this is really good :)