Name: Loahisi (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 06:53 am · For: Chapter 3
I was so sad for Maddie through all of this story. You can feel that she loves Jonathan and Bruce. And what happened was so sad. Sometimes you can't fight your feeling. She's been so strong after Bruce accident. And really Noah, stop being a hero lol, you're too hot when you do that.
Author's Response: I love hero Noah too LOL... thanks!
Name: neddiheht (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:35 am · For: Chapter 3
I really like that Noah talks a bit about how he felt when he was blind at the beginning of this story. I feel like he spent all that time dealing with it and not talking about it, and yet it was a huge part of his life that had a devastating impact on frankly everything.
What I find puzzling here is Maddie... Luke and Noah are pretty much the closest friends she has. And she knows their history and it's awkward and embarrasing and they've gotten through it. And something so parallel happens to her and she NEVER talks to them about it? Even about the relationship with the professor... I'd think with the complexities from Mason that she might talk to Noah just about that. Anyway... it's a nice little tangle, I just can see Luke and Noah being hurt that she didn't trust them to share it with them.
I guess Maddie saw them both suffering and perhaps didn't want to add to it.
Name: neddiheht (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:16 am · For: Chapter 2
I can pretty much guarantee that Wesleyan doesn't have any policy that would cause a student to be expelled for relations with a professor.
I get that this is Maddie's story... but you've interspersed bits of Nuke that I feel get shortchanged. I want to see the struggle at the studio... partly because I felt short changed by the lack of reaction in the previous installment and I... Noah realizing that people are treating him differently... it would drive him crazy. And I don't think he'd know how to deal with it... he'd go to Luke for that and so to me, it feels like there are missing scenes.
Again... I lacked in that department. Sorry. At the time I didn't want them to dwell too much on what happened but I suspect it appears that I might have handled a sensitive issue insensitively. Again this is mostly down to inexperience as a writer I guess...
Name: neddiheht (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:03 am · For: Chapter 1
The flashbacks are good, but I am struggling with walls of italics.
I think the bit about Luke wanting to see the hearing to make sure the guy gets what he deserves is some interesting foreshadowing, intentional or not, of later events with the hit-and-run.
I have to think if Maddie was involved with a professor she'd be more discreet... not for her own sake, but for his. There are few ways to get fired as a professor, and that's one of the few.
This story is flawed... that's for sure! :-)
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 12:14 pm · For: Chapter 3
impressive storyline cant say anything else
i hope jonathan and maddie can work it out
they deserve to be happy together
Thanks D! Yip... I wanted to give the boys a break and also give Maddie a love of her life! :-)
Name: CGil (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 03:58 am · For: Chapter 3
Here I am again...and I am still loving it..Can't stay away from it..This particular story ended unexpectedly...where do you come up with these ideas? I have already recomended that my sister start to read this series!! Keep it up...Now off to read Precious Discovery!!!
Believe me! If I knew I'd tell you! I have no idea where the stories come from... they seem to just write themselves! I'll sit down at a blank screen and think... Oh no! I have nothing to write... but then once I get going it just happens! Very wierd! Anyway I'm so glad you are enjoying the series so much... And thanks for recommending them to your sister... I hope she alway enjoys them!
Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 07:02 am · For: Chapter 3
Well that was wild! Poor Maddie! Though she really shouldn't fall into bed with guys so quickly, since the last time she did that was Noah, and look how THAT turned out. LOL!
Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 06:54 am · For: Chapter 2
OOOOOHhhhhh boy, AWKWARD! LMAO. Great twist.
Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 06:49 am · For: Chapter 1
Oooh, so Maddie's involved with her professor? Interesting. Looks like this Greg guy is jealous and could make trouble.
Name: Santasorted (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2010 03:37 am · For: Chapter 3
Another enjoyable story! Thanks Seajellybaby!
Thanks so much!
Name: glori572 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:30 pm · For: Chapter 3
wow, that was great. felt so bad for bruce though, a brialliant mind cut short. hoping you have at least an epilogue planned for our boys. i'd still love to see a nuke wedding, they are in california, and i think it's still legal there :) please continue
Hi Glori! Glad you enjoyed Maddie's story... It was floating in my head and I just had to write it! I'm already onto the next story and may eventually move the boys towards the alter... who knows? Thanks :-)
Name: tammynelson78 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 05:41 am · For: Chapter 3
Absolutely love this story. Keep writing.....I can't get enough of Luke & Noah love.
I can't get enough of writing about them... so there should be loads more to come... Thanks for the comment!
Name: newhaven (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 12:25 pm · For: Chapter 2
Between Luke's strip tease and Maddie's problems, this was one interesting chapter.
Name: tammynelson78 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:27 am · For: Chapter 2
WOW...WHAT A TWIST WITH MADDIE!!!!
Name: glori572 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 08:51 pm · For: Chapter 1
oh,oh..maddie and her professor, wow. well, more like wow, to maddie and a quickie on a train, with a stranger. that was unexpected. you've got me wanting to know more, please continue.
Name: Santasorted (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 12:35 pm · For: Chapter 1
OH! Maddie and the professor... hee hee hee...
Yip! Go figure!