Name: Loahisi (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 02:30 pm · For: Chapter 1
Oh Maddie, Maddie, I really hope nothing is wrong with you.
Noah is so cute when he's talking about the house. Bring a child in this room. lol
Author's Response: He's looking to the future with Luke... sigh.. :-)
Name: neddiheht (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:07 am · For: Chapter 1
The airport scene is cute. And Noah's not quite tall enough for me not to buy the craning neck bit, so it works.
I also completely buy the Maddie surprising them at the house piece... it's so like Maddie to interrupt for the least malicious of reasons.
I'm curious that Luke and Noah have become quite THAT comfortable together that they'd have such an outrageous PDA in a store. I'm not saying it's impossible, and the way it's done here with Maddie is priceless, but... it's like they have no fear of retribution for being gay at all. And there's like five places in the US where that's really possible for gay people generally and LA isn't one of them. That doesn't mean that Luke and Noah as an individual couple couldn't be... but as victims of anti-gay violence, I would expect them to be more cautious... well, for Noah to be more cautious -- I'm missing a twinge where he at least thinks about and discards the concern, if that makes sense.
With Maddie and the bruise... I expect Luke to push more here. Noah I can see respecting boundaries, but Luke doesn't usually hold back. I'm expecting him to be incensed and stewing and I really don't see that here.
Yes... this is another bad attempt by me to inject some humour into my fics... This is a skill where I'm lacking I'm afraid and something I really admire from Ficnic and Jeri... I'm working on it ;-)
Name: JustSomeoneSomewhere (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 09:35 pm · For: Chapter 1
Lol i wanted to read this back. i didn't comment this because i was reading when i was guest not a member lol but now i can say what i thought the first time i read this and still.
actually the scene at the airport is always in my head, i really love it.
I really like this one. i love how they met at the airport, it was absolutely gorgeous!
Thank you very much ;-)
Name: buttercup (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 06:05 pm · For: Chapter 1
Love, love love the airport scene. They are so cute together.
Maddie, Maddie, Maddie. I'm beginning to like you, but you really needed to let them have a day or two by themselves before you came! LOL
LOL at the mattress store! That is funny!
And whoever or whatever put that bruise on Maddie had better watch out! Luke and Noah do not play when it comes to their friends! Just sayin'!
Poor Maddie! She was trying to help out with the moving in and everything... but yes... bad timing much!!
And yes... Maddie has a secret...
Name: comicgirl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 08:24 am · For: Chapter 1
I know... but it's not what you think ;-)
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 04:15 pm · For: Chapter 1
cute and sweet !!
love the part at the airport so great!
and the love they have for eachother warms my heart
and maddie there is something wrong there :(
Yes another bridging chapter full of fluff! :-) I'm actually stopped doing these one-shots now I've noticed...
Name: Santasorted (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:33 am · For: Chapter 1
I love, I love, I love the FLUFF!! More please!
More coming! Thanks!
Name: glori572 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 02:59 pm · For: Chapter 1
this was so freaking great. hoping maddie isn't getting abused, she's too tough to put up with that, or so i hope. love the walk through the house and the mention of the smaller room. would like to finally know what the nightmares are about. so hopefully noah will go see a professional who may help him unlock the mystery. can't wait for more, please continue.
Really appreciate how you always take the time to comment glori! I love them!
Name: tammynelson78 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 01:35 am · For: Chapter 1
LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! THIS LA SERIES IS FANTASTIC....EXCELLENT FLOW AND CREATIVITY...I JUST LOVE TO REACH HOW LUKE & NOAH'S LIFE PROGRESSES. I ENJOYED NOAH'S TOUR OF THE HOUSE WITH LUKE AND INVISIONING A FUTURE NURSERY WITH THE SMALL BEDROOM.
I LAUGHED HYSTERICALLY PICTURING THE BED STORE SCENE AND THEM TESTING OUT A BED........TOTALLY BELIEVABLE AND FUN TO IMAGINE.
KEEP THIS SERIES GOING...TOTALLY IN LOVE.
Ah! It makes my heart sing to read how people enjoy my stories! Thank's so much!
Name: snuke (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 09:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
I love this series.