Name: bebe11 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2012 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 1
Sweet! And who's the mystery man I wonder?
Author's Response: Many people missed that mention of the mystery man... you're sharp to spot it!
Name: neddiheht (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 04:59 pm · For: Chapter 1
Ahhh... we don't get to see Noah claim his reward for the rollercoaster....
Given his admission that he didn't like roller coasters, it was cruel to put him in the front of the coaster... it's the worst spot.
This feels like mostly fluff (though I know you're setting some things up for later chapters), but what I like about it is that the boys are learning to have fun together again. Sure it's great to see sexual energy and kissing and all of that, but relationships are more than that... especially relationships between these two, who spent months of screen time where the most intimacy they were allowed was moonlight walks around Snyder pond.
Ah yes! I admit! I was new to writing and letting people see what I wrote was a big step for me. Made me nervous as hell! So writing sex scenes, and gay sex scenes to boot, was really not something I thought I'd ever do. Since you've read the whole series I'm sure you've noticed that by now I'm over this... although writing them still makes me turn beet red! And I never go into graphic detail either... I'm sure you've noticed. LOL
Re: The Rollercoaster... Luke is cruel like that LOL!
Name: Loahisi (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 02:13 pm · For: Chapter 1
A happy chapter with just fluff I love that.
Yes... rare with me so soak it up! LOL!
Name: buttercup (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 01:49 pm · For: Chapter 1
I love it!!!!! I love the very rare times L&N have had easy going fun times like this. Would have loved to have seen Noah's face when he was on the roller coaster. That was just too funny!
As much as I love writing angst, drama, suspense... which I'm sure you will notice as the series progresses... I really love to sprinkle a little sugar in too when I can...
Name: comicgirl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2011 05:42 am · For: Chapter 1
ohh i loved the beach mmm hot !
Yes... a lot of people liked that one... we didn't get to see much of that in Oakdale, did we? LOL!
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:36 am · For: Chapter 1
Yes... just a feel good chapter...
Name: Santasorted (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:16 am · For: Chapter 1
Oh my word! Absolutely delightful! Happiness it certainly is! And the lovely tender scene at the end... perfect! You're writing is amazing...
You're amazing too! Thanks!
Name: daan73 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 05:12 am · For: Chapter 1
ooh dreading the goodbye :(
Name: ficnic (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 08:48 am · For: Chapter 1
Aww they break my heart. Love them together, even with the obstacles they face.
Me too :-)
Name: tammynelson78 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 08:54 pm · For: Chapter 1
I plan too! Thanks! :-)
Name: allie1075 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 04:55 pm · For: Chapter 1
omg i love these stories! keep them coming :D
Thanks so much allie1075! It really makes me happy to know that people are enjoying reading these as much as I'm enjoying writing them!
Name: Aspirwriter (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 10:23 am · For: Chapter 1
Such a feel-good piece - the swim, the sun, the ice cream, the rollercoaster, and the realization at the end that, "THIS is it." "THIS is all that matters."
Hi again Tom! Thanks so much for another lovely comment! They mean so much coming from a fab writer like you!