Name: scj0710 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 11:39 am · For: Chapter 1
Congratulations on your First Place Anon, Sarah! Such a great combination of emotions. The Colonel's awful cruelty brings sadness - then Luke brings smiles with his cheeky remark to Noah. As it that isn't enough, you give us more touching emotions and some very quality sexy time. Adore!
Name: wheelie47 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 07:36 am · For: Chapter 1
Ah Sarah, Sarah, Sarah!! This beautifully written story took my breath away. You write in such a way - so vividly - that I'm literally in the room with them.
You used the prompt perfectly - taking us from the utter darkness of Noah's worst nightmares to the shinning light of Luke and their love, gloriously celebrated in some nuke hotness!
Perfect and wonderful!
Totally deserving of winning the anon.
Thank you for such an excellent read!!
Name: European Orchid (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 01:38 am · For: Chapter 1
You fellow Nukies seem intent on making me cry this week....
You pull off an impressive gear-shift here, Sarah.
Your almost poetic description of the Colonel's abuse makes it all the more vivid and painful. I felt like I was huddeled in a corner of the room, made to watch a terrible event, and feeling both little and grown-up Noah's pain.
And the more raw style you use to describe their lovemaking, perfectly drives home the urgency, the need, the fire - both in love and physical passion - between my two favourite guys.
You pretty much rock. Actually no. Forget the 'pretty much'. You Rock!
Name: Valenti1965 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 01:20 am · For: Chapter 1
Young Noah - my heart bleeds for him and the misery his father put him through.
Thank god he has Luke to lead him into the light! oh and hotness....loved this story so much.
Congratulations on winning the anon with the fabulous story Sarah!!! xxx